Workshop Takeaway

After reading the notes given to me on my fourth draft of the memoir, it has become clear that certain aspects of my writing still need to be clarified and elaborated on. For instance, I will take the note that Sophie gave me to heart, working to better show my overall point and exigence throughout the memoir. In my final draft, I plan to carefully add stories or sentences in order to create a more cohesive narrative. Additionally, I plan to edit the grammar mistakes I may have missed and remove passive voice whenever possible.